Monday, February 23, 2015

PB3A

     The academic publication I choose is called "Being Sane in Insane Places." In this experiment, psychologist D. L. Rosenhan makes the observation that when people with mental diseases are put into psychiatric hospitals, they will always retain the label that they are/were once 'insane.' Doctors tend to misdiagnose patients as they try to fit normal behavior into the symptoms of a proposed mental illness. He puts this idea to the test by gathering a group of 8 mentally stable people with normal lives to infiltrate wards around the States. Once admitted, these 'pseudopatients' will act completely normal and record their treatment from caretakers and doctors. The results seem to confirm that despite showing absolutely no signs of illness or abnormality, these individuals are still seen as sick and simply "in remission." 
     For translating the article into a different genre for a younger audience, I will direct it towards children around 6 years old. I think 'dumbing down' the article will be a good idea, so people in that range can relate to it easier. The topic of illness and labeling is also a heavy concept that may not be appropriate for the target age. The complex idea of sanity and insanity should be switched to the simple emotions of happy and sad. While there are multiple subjects in different places in the actual experiment, only one main character will be in the children's story to keep the plot easy to follow. 
     As for the actual genre, I want to translate the article into a fable of sorts, where there is usually a moral or lesson at the end. The sentence structure will be kept very simple. Maybe I can add some rhymes to it for more appeal. The sentences have to be far apart and supplemented with pictures, considering the relatively short attention span of a child. The setting of the plot can be two places: one seen as sad and the other happy. The main character, born bearing an insignia of the sad people, acts abnormally happy and is banished to the other realm. The happy people shun him for his gloomy markings before realizing that he is just the same as they are. The moral of the story would be that people should not judge others based on their origin and the environment they came from. This plot connects to the article's experiment through the idea of labeling (the marks on the main character) and how a label can cause people to make immediate assumptions/judgments about an individual. 
     For the genre towards an older audience, I think of people considered seniors above age 65. After reading the prompt, I pictured an old grandma in a rocking chair, fixated on a tabloid. Rather than moving towards the connotations of seriousness that most genres for older people seem to have, I want to translate the article into a genre that can still be taken lightly. A tabloid is usually in the form of a magazine, telling news by using sensational titles and stories to draw in people such as the poor gullible grandma. I will need to come up with a shocking title for the translation; it can be extremely exaggerated, worded in a skewed way, or even be false. As for the actual content, I should be very biased in my presentation of information by misrepresenting other sides of the argument. I can write in a way that may cause paranoia about whether people are really what they seem to be and make the grandma question her own sanity. By focusing on the mislabeling of individuals and stretching the truth, I can create a sensational story that inaccurately portrays information. 


7 comments:

  1. I like the idea of a fable for the younger audience. I also think it's good that you are already thinking about setting, plot, characters, etc. I think this genre transformation will be accurate for the new genre as well as using info from the scholarly article. I like how you didn't take the older audience genre too serious--something I did because I could not think of anything else. For the tabloid, I'm a little confused on how it is transforming. Does the scholarly article describe how "insane" people are portrayed and that is the part you're framing in on for the tabloid? The idea isn't clear to me, but I feel like you'll make it work.

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  2. Wow! You were very thorough in making rhetorical and conventional decisions. I think that thoroughness will help you overall in this assignment. I also liked that you considered how the content was conceptually related to the audience. You mentioned changing the ideas of insane and sane to sad and happy, as a means to simplify the overall ideas of the text for an audience of children.
    You said what you wanted out of the new genre, but you never explicitly stated what the purpose of the new genres were. For me deciding on the purpose of the new genre is helpful because it allows me to stay focused on using conventions and rhetorical strategies that not only are common for the genre, but contribute to furthering the goals of the new piece. From reading your pb3A, it is clear you have a good command over conventions and a clear sense of direction for this last WP. Good luck!

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  3. Herman, I really like the topic you chose for your academic paper since it is a surprising fact that patients get mistreated since they are labeled as insane. I can see how the two genres you chose can make this topic more appealing to each audience. I liked how the fable is really effective in appealing to a younger audience since it is more entertaining and simple in explaining the topic. It also teaches a lesson that relates back to it. However, I was kind of unclear about why a tabloid would purposely portray the wrong information. I agree that you should be very bias and argue strongly against the other side, but you shouldn't give wrong information since it can make you discreditable. The older audience wouldn't believe the tabloid if it was false. Overall, I think you did a good job in choosing two genres to translate the academic paper into, but you should explain more of how each appeals to the audience.

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  5. Hey Herman,

    The article you chose is really interesting. I like the idea of creating a fable with this topic. You did a great job explaining thoroughly why a fable will work for a younger audience. I agree with you when you said that children have small attention span. My concern for this genre is the story that you’ll be presenting in your fable. It sounds good but doesn’t really relate to the actual experiment. I think instead of having a character sad/mad, maybe you should have the character change from being nice to mean and how his/her friends treat him differently. Just a suggestion. ☺ For your genre for the older audience, I don’t think a tabloid would work for people older than the age of 65. I feel like those people would not care about tabloids at that age. That is just my opinion. Maybe you can gear it towards an audience at the age of 25-40.

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  6. Herman,

    Your plans for these genre translations -- especially the one tailored to the younger audience -- was such a pleasure to read. At the expense of sounding super-corny, it was very beautiful to read how you thought through the delicacy with which this needs to be translated to younger kids. :)

    Z

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